C.J. Mustang

This is good, Angel! I loved it! If no one has told you yet, to make a post you have to have 2 reviews on other people's posts. There's just ...

Wow, that's good! Personally, I didn't see anything wrong with it. I can't wait to read the next one! I do have one question, though; is it supposed to start ...

Sohini~ I think the title fits very well with your poem! I personally loved it, even though it was a little random to me... :wink: :D I found nothing wrong ...

Oh. My. Gosh. I think my IQ just went down 10 pts, but it was totally worth it. :D My favorite partwas this: EDWARD: I MUST PROTECT HER! SNOINK: I ...

This was so cute! I loved how you transferred it into a toy version of Romeo and Juliet, with the names switched! The name switching was very amusing. :D It ...

Awww! How cute!! I love it! Only one thing I saw that was a little confusing. at the beginning, you wrote: He’s probably holding her hand right now, I thought ...

Ok, I thought this had a heck of a lot stronger voice than 'Stronger', but I saw some mistakes that I recommend you fix: My body is a rag doll

I liked this poem, although it's not as strong as your other one, 'Beatin' by love'. (While I'm at it, you might want to change "beatin'" to "beaten". Just a ...

ok, I loved your poem, but I found a couple of things that you might want to fix: You said you loved me. Then why did you hurt me? Beating ...

that was...not right. 14 years old? and getting into a bed with a completely naked boy? being the laughing stock of the school just because you haven't had a kiss ...

um, I thought this poem was kind of confusing. there are too many big words, in my opinion. You can search it But you won't find

I liked your poem, though I couldn't quite understand what it was saying at the beginning. It kind of sounds like William Shakespeare at the end. I really liked it! ...

The best of luck to you! I hope you win! I do agree with bkwrm, though. the past tense and present tense thing is a bit confusing. Other than that, ...

I really like your poem! I only have a few suggestions, though: A minute closer to death I am than I was a minute ago... I've lost my hope maybe ...

This poem was kind of confusing to me, mostly because of how it was laid out. I think it should be put in stanzas. You also should probably have some ...